Paragraph & Sentence Parts

level Ii

This page updated:  07/22/2019

Revise & Edit

When is this assignment due?

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The Goal:  


You will use PEG Writing to complete the revise & edit stages of the writing process.

Remember our Essential Question?  What makes an amusement park roller coaster such a big attraction?

You might have used this as your topic sentence:  There are many things that make amusement park roller coasters a big attraction to park guests.

Need to visit the roller coaster site?  The link is in in the lower right.

Directions: (this lesson was updated 10/7)

1.  Log into PEG Writing

  • Your user name will be your WTS login (firstnamelastinitialwts)

  • Your password will be your last name (lastname)

    • if your last name is less than 5 letters long, add "wts" to the end of it​

Example:  Sally Smartpants

Username:  sallyswts

Password:  smartpants

2.  Choose your class

3.  Find the writing sample you wish to work on in the list.

4.  Click on the link (the date is the link to the writing sample)  

5. Read through your work.

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Revising & Editing

1.  As you go in to do your revisions, it might help to separate sentences apart with a double-space so it's easy to find the text line that needs correction.  This step is optional.

2.  READ EACH comment carefully.  "S" comments are spelling suggestions.  "G" comments are grammar comments.  Gray highlights are sentences that have grammar and sentence structure issues.

3.  What to do first? 

4.  Continue revising and editing until there are no errors identified by PEG Writing. You will hit "submit" to see updated revisions in PEG Writing.

5. It is at this point you will gain further development of ideas, organization and style feedback from your instructor, so be ready to share.